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I'm Ready

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...titles? What is this I don't even

It was pretty sunny earlier, so I got to take my new camera out and have a bit of fun with it. It was pretty cool, I'm starting to understand the concepts and practice of manipulating aperture, shutter speed and exposure.

I've always wanted to take a photo somewhat like this, but my P&S obviously just couldn't get a DoF like the DSLR can, so I'm quite excited to experiment with things like what you see above.

Anyway, it's a bit of fun (I am well aware of how cliché these shots are), not much more, but do let me know what you think. :)



Edit: "Shutter Speed:1717986/2147483628 second" :lol: I don't know what that's about.
I'm also quite sick of the quality reduction of jpegs on dA. :( Dunno how to fix that.
Image size
942x634px 62.88 KB
Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D3100
Shutter Speed
1717986/2147483628 second
Aperture
F/5.6
Focal Length
55 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Aug 11, 2011, 1:34:40 PM
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

This is a great photo! I can tell you experimented and put a lot of thought into the photo, overall. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/n/n…" width="15" height="15" alt=":nod:" title="Nod"/>

One of the first things I noticed was how well the flowers contrast with the background. The white stands out beautifully, to bring our attention to the flowers more quickly. I also like the choice of a very simple background, to not distract the viewer's attention.

I think the shallow DoF is great for this photo, it puts only the foreground in focus and certainly adds a lot of depth to the piece. I wish the brown leaf on the left wasn't also in focus, but that's probably not something you'd intended..

Technically, I don't think this photo is as strong as some of your others. The flowers are overexposed which loses a lot of detail overall. There is also quite a bit of noise/grain in the photo, which I don't know where it came from since your ISO is 100. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="19" height="19" alt=":shrug:" title="Shrug"/>

The composition bugs me as well. I think you could've shifted the camera down and possibly zoomed out just a tad a as well.

Great work though, I'll be sure to take a look at the rest of your gallery! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>